Report introduction - activity 2

 The second activity on the report introduction section had us looking at two different sample of an introduction section of a report. Then we were told to point out the issues that we had with the reports and write out what we feels and thinks about them.

For the first report introduction section, there were a few important issues that need to be learnt :\


INTRODUCTION CHAPTER 1
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•  The project overview is unnecessary 
• Grammatical errors- spelling, punctuation, past and present tense ect.
• not enough elaboration on the project objective
• wrong word usage of title-"Problem Definition" should be "Significant of the Study"

INTRODUCTION BACKGROUND

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• Background of the study is irrelevant
• not clear on project scope and purpose
• Grammatical errors